Vihanga Perera has been shortlisted (yes once again!) for the Gratiaen Prize. This time for his collection of poems, 'Love and Protest'. The others shortlisted are Sandali Ash (for the novella 'Rao's Guide to Lime Pickling'), Quintus G Fernando (for the novel 'Celibacy Factor') and Santhan Ayathurai (for the novel 'Rails Run Parallel'). This is a comment on Vihanga's poetry published in the Sunday Observer, July 18, 2010.
A few years ago, I was privileged to be invited to read my
poetry at the University
of Peradeniya . English
poetry. So the crowd was small, naturally.
I read some of my poetry, a poem by Pablo Neruda and a couple of poems
from Ariyawansa Ranaweera’s collection, ‘Elimahan
kavi saha guha kavi (Poems of the cave and of its outside)’. I was
particularly inspired by the quote from the Dhammapada
at the beginning of the book, ‘Asareerang
guha sayang…’ (the light is not too far from the mouth of the cave, but it
is outside, nevertheless). I remember
mentioning that for economy of word, alliterative power, substance, nuance and
rhythm, there is no greater poet (or linguist) than Siddhartha Gauthama. Others
also read. Most of what I heard was
pedestrian, including tortuous attempts at turning ideology into poetry by an
award-winning author. There was a high point though. Vihanga Perera.
Vihaga read out what some might call an unashamedly sexist
poem. The politics of propriety aside,
to me it was a brilliant piece of writing.
It was entertaining, dramatic, creative and most important, he kept it
to the minimum length that the content demanded. It was not just another one of
those prose passages chopped into short 4-7 word snippets so that it looks like
a ‘poem’. I remember telling him that I
think he should write plays.
Vihanga was then a first year student in the Arts Faculty.
He graduated and joined the English Department of Sri Jayawardenapura University . I am not sure if he wrote any plays, but he
did write several novels. His novels
were shortlisted for the Gratiaen Prize on two occasions. I know that someone has praised his writing
(novels) to the hilt. Beauty is in the
eyes of the beholder, I suppose. While a
Gratiaen shortlisting is good and encouraging, it could also mean (like in the
case of all ‘shortlistings’) a product of weak choices and/or poor judging. I don’t think Vihanga or anyone else (self
included) should make too much of such ‘recognition’ outside of considering it
‘encouragement’. My point is that
Vihanga, while he certainly can write and is capable of weaving a story, is not
exactly (as yet) a budding Simon Navagattegama or Garcia Marquez or anyone else
that he thinks is ‘great’. I hope he
doesn’t think so either for that would be the ultimate trip that truncates his
literary orbit.
His novels, ‘Unplugged Quarter’ (2009) and Stable Horses
(2008), both cited as ‘longer fiction/novel’ in his blog, http://vkper.wordpress.com, and his
‘experimental short fiction’ piece, ‘The(ir) (au)topsy’ (2006), like all of his
work poetry included (see ‘Pesticides’, a collection of 14 poems), are,
according to Vihanga, are amazing literary works. He says, for example, that ‘The(ir)
(au)topsy’ is ‘one of the most under-rated and under-weighted publications of
[his] lifetime’ and of his poetry, opines that they are ‘unarguably the best
written by a Sri Lankan in English post Lakdasa Wikkramasinha.’
That’s Vihanga.
Arrogant. Tongue-in-cheek. Reminds me of the man who said that if a list
was made of all the humble people in the world he would be No 2, and added ‘if
I don’t talk about myself, who would?’
Vihanga is a young man in a hurry and that’s a good thing
for someone his age. He is a prolific
writer, doesn’t give a damn about whose toes he steps on, says his piece
regardless and again, typical for those his age, knows everything there is to
know in this world. That all-knowing is
what makes (to me at least) his fiction a tad tedious. Someone who has all the answers tends to act
prophet but Vihanga has a few more feet to go to get out of the guhaava, I think. For now, there’s sloganeering and a tendency
to ‘write in’ political preferences. It
harms narrative, sounds raw and steals from flow.
Having said this, I still think that Vihanga Perera is
clearly the freshest voice among those who write poetry in English in Sri Lanka
today. He has the word at his fingertip,
one feels, spins it out effortlessly, has a kind of heart-rhythm that is
clearly lacking in a lot of things that get the ‘poetry’ label. Don’t trust me. Go to Barefoot and check the
Sri Lankan poetry. Much of it is
rubbish. Vivimarie Vanderpoorten’s ‘Nothing prepares you’ is an exception. Vihanga’s irreverence gives his poetry a
cutting-edge feel. He is cynical, rude
(more so for effect, one feels) and unforgiving, but there is no denying that
he has a gaze that can quickly cut through ‘appearance’ and delve into that
ugly underside of things and processes which we all know (even if it’s just an
instinctive thing) but like to pretend doesn’t exist at all.
His take on the taming of Angulimala is utterly irreverent
but telling:
‘While 999 men were
killed, their penises cut
Where was this guide,
the Buddha:
The worldly
compassionate one?
Where – more the
question – was the police:
Polishing the
interiors of their gun?’
Never mind that the Buddha was not policeman, official or
self-appointed. Vihanga points out that
Angulimala changes gear and trade and becomes a prominent player of the
Buddhist tradition and claims that his name survives more as the man who shaped
husbandless wives. To me, he’s got it
all wrong, and that comes from his ‘all-knowingness’. Still, one cannot help admiring the
word-footwork and dramatic rush in the following (preceding) lines:
‘This was a major
serial killer incident,
F****** terrorism
spreading
Wherever there were
men and men had balls.
Brought down to his
knees, on Buddha’s bidding.
His Rest begins. His
Desire falls.’
Vihanga is a political statement maker. As poet he has license to add and subtract,
contextualize and de-contextualize. ‘The
Trek for Rights Sri Lanka’ is VK’s
overview of things. He writes of
Prageeth Ekneligoda (‘journalist’, according to some; porno-peddler to me, but
nevertheless a citizen who has gone missing):
‘We’ve stopped
worrying about this Prageeth.
A numbskull, all the
same:
Just 46 chromosomes
and a bitta knowledge.
Just a family and two
shitty kids.
Wife is just another
woman.
Some non-mainstream
fucking stringer
Some non-patriotic
deal.
Time will heal.
People are crazy,
making him into a fetish
That human rights are
f***ed up. ‘
He takes pot shots.
He sys that his m-f-ing friends, at the height of their patriotism had
posted my links on his (Vihanga’s) ‘Facebook’
and that some continue to do so:
‘Some still
Post Malinda,
mercenary pen in hand
Aiming his tarot at
David Miliband.
Conscience is not his
employer.’
Vihanga gets his political knickers twisted a lot, but shhhh
don’t tell him that, he ‘knows all’, after all.
That’s not the point here. He
would say the same of me. The point is
that even Pablo Neruda was victim of such wardrobe malfunctioning, especially
in defending Stalinism. Even when this happened, as Garcia Marquez points out
in a series of interviews under the title ‘Fragrance of Guava’, Neruda was like
a King Midas of Literature, that ‘everything he touched turned into poetry’. Vihanga is not Neruda, no. I don’t have any unholy fascination with
patriotism or any ism for that matter, but even when Vihanga is ill-informed
and analytically slothful, he does write well.
‘I saw Wimal
Weerawansa’s hoardings
And I snapped the
talisman off my throat
It is not he, it is me
The f***ing talisman
of the nation.
He’s a talisman,
alright,
But how lousy he mess
up the spelling?’
The reference is to Wimal’s election campaign and its
signature line, ‘Maubime Panchayudaya’.
Biting, yes, but there is an element of elegance here, a clean cut-through that
does not leave any frayed edges to be sandpapered away later.
And it is not all about politics and things related to
power. In ‘In a roomful of Strangers’,
he turns into painter:
‘But will your furtive
fidgeting of this
Moment’s rhyme
Keep the bloodlines
flowing; resist
The test of time?’
He speaks of and to his generation and of others as
well. ‘Bachelor of Arts’ gives
perspective:
‘Problem is
Some kids took those
lectures seriously.
Tried to unravel and analyze.
Deconstruct and be
political. To be
Sensitive to gender;
use the ‘his’ or the ‘hers’
Po-co, po-mo,
po-Poocault, anit-co, re-co:
Ithin (avasana
vashayen), tho ko?’
‘These knowledges,’
Vihanga pronounces, apparently with anger, but to me in brutal honestly, ‘is where the common die; kings hold their
shit rag banners high’.
I am coming to these conclusions based on a set of poems I
asked Vihanga to email me and which he did. All written in the first few months
of this year. Not all of it is great of
course, but there is here something that you will not find in any of the
poetry-blogs of Sri Lankans writing in English.
In time, Vihanga will know less, I am sure. Less and less as time goes on. His cynicism will become even more lyrical. And
he will not depend as much on meter and rhyme for rhythm and melody. I might be
dead by that time. That’s irrelevant,
though.
msenevira@gmail.com
2 comments:
Mr Malinda, I'm Yasodhara Kariyawasam, hope you remember me as your friend's daughter. Well, I was researching about Gratiaen Award winners and was reading some of Vivimarie Vanderpoorten poetry when I stumbled upon Vihanga's criticism on her poetry.
I thought I was going overboard with being critical about his already over-boarded criticism. Some of it about VVP, I agreed with, but most I thought felt angry and baseless. Like I said, I thought I was being too critical of the critique for thinking he came across as a bit of a know-it-all, till I found your criticism on his poetry, which I already read through and formed an opinion which resonates yours.
Also glad to know that you are a fan of Neruda as well. I would like it if you read my poetry some time. Would love an opinion! I am getting to know more and more about Sri Lankan poets these days and reading your collection of poetry again as well, which you gifted me some years ago.
sure. email them to me: malindasenevi@gmail.com
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